In morning we are focus on writing our own essay. I'm finish about writhing introduction and paragraph 1 and 2. And today my goal was finish about writing paragraph 3 and conclusion. But I don't met my goal for today. Because, I think I am working well as I can but, today when I write essay I don't have ideas to much, So, I thought when next time I write essay I have to prepare and get ready to write my own essay. But Actually, I like write essay. Because, I think when I write essay I can write creativity and I like the way we can think and say my own opinion. So, I enjoyed about writing and thinking about essay. And In case junior time, I did choir. We practice song that we will show our audience to show our singing. I think singing is fun and I enjoyed it. I'm not good at singing
but I will practice a lot!

I think you should indent your start of your paragraph
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